Small Words Add Up To A Big Mistake



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Was the person that wrote this in a rush? Though there are less than fifty words several mistakes were made. Remember, it only takes a minute to proofread..

Melyssa Ford might of retired from the music video’s but she still is active in magazine photo shoots and her must up to date work is the upcoming 2011 Winter King Magazine. Check out a excerpt from her interview with King magazine.

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1. Replace "of" with "have"
2. Remove "the"
3. "Is" should replace "still" and vice versa.
4. "Most" should replace "must"
5. Run-on sentence

Did I miss anything?